Rabu, 18 Desember 2013

business corespondence



Appointment Letter & Replay
An appointment letter is written to schedule the appointment for a meeting for the business purposes. You should mention the purpose for the meeting or any other event in the letter. Also, please ensure to describe your expectations from the meeting. Try to keep the language very sophisticated and tone of letter cordial if you are seeking an appointment for job interview. After writing an appointment letter, of course there is a replay from the appointment letter is written to confirm an appointment.
Expression used in Appointment Letter :
·         Herewith this letter I would like to .....
·         I have to inform you that .....
·         I am writing to confirm our appointment that .....
·         Thank you for your letter of .....
·         Regret I have to inform you that I cannot  come to .....
·         Please confirm to Mr/Mrs .....
·         Please let me know .....
·         I look forward to hearing from you.
·         If you need more information, please do not hesitate to telephone Mr/Mrs ....
Kind of appointment letter :
·         Employment appointment letter
·         Business appointment letter
·         Sale and purchase appointment letter
·         Lease appointment letter
Letter of agreement usually need a assurance that both sides there are no losers.
In a letter of agreement usually includes an agreement on the rights and obligations of each party are each bind themselves to do something or not do something. In addition to the two sides, sometimes in the agreement involves a third party to confirm the agreement.


Example An Appointment Letter & Replay :
Appointment Letter :

 

PT.INDAH MAKMUR
Jalan Tirtayasa No. 27
Cilegon
12 June 2013

Mr. Green
PT.  Angkasa Jaya
Jalan Patimura No.34
Jakarta

Dear Mr. Green :
Herewith this letter I would like to inform that Mr. Joe will be visiting Canada to attend the opening of Merlin Hotel and intend to stay for one week to arrange various business matters. He would like you to meet you on Saturday 15 June 2013 at 10 am in his Suite hotel at the Merlin. Please confirm to Miss Avril at 021-345879 if this dates and time is convenient.

Yours sincerelly,


Avril Afiantina
Secretary


Replay Letter :
PT.  Citra Jaya
Jalan Patimura No. 314
Jakarta
14 June 2013


Mrs. Siska Santina
PT. Abadi Makmur
Jalan Tirtayasa No. 124

Dear Mrs. Siska Santina,
Thank you for your letter of 12th  June 20013, it was written that you wanted to make an appointment with Mr. Benny, our General Manager. He will be very pleased to receive a visit from you on Thursday, 15 June 20013at 10.00 in our campus. He is looking forward to seeing you soon.

Yours sincerelly,


Rina Alaska
Secretary





Sales Letters
A sales letter is a piece of direct mail which is designed to persuade the reader to purchase a particular product or service in the absence of a salesman. Sales letters are used to introduce products or services to consumers. As such, sales letters tend to use formal letter structures and are rather impersonal because they are sent to more than one person. Sales letters often ask readers to consider a "pain point" - a problem that a person needs solved, and then introduce a product that will provide the solution.It's important to quickly move to your sales pitch in your sales letter as most readers will understand that your sales letter is a form of advertising. Sales letters also often include an offer to encourage customers to try the product. It's important that these offers are clear and provide a useful service to the reader.
Components :
An efficient sales letter contain four interrelated parts.
1.      Getting the reader's attention.
2.      Create interest and build desire for the product.
3.      Offers convincing proof.
4.      Persuade the reader to act.

Expression used in Sales Letter :
·         Are you having trouble ...
·         This is why it is important to have ...
·         At X, we have the skills and experience to ...
·         May we stop by and offer you a FREE estimate of how much it would cost to ...
·         If so, give us a call at X and set up and appointment with one of your friendly operators.



Sample Sales Letter :

PT. MAJU MUNDUR
Jalan Cendrawasih No. 287
Cilegon
15 June 2013

Mr. Rely
PT. JAYA BADI
Jalan Rajawali No. 26
Serang


Dear Mr. Rely :
I would like your help in solving a problem that people in business may have, therefore i would like your assistance in answering the enclosed survey of our medical supplier. By doing so you will let us know how we can best serve you. I will be calling you on Wednesday to ask your time to help us serve our costumers better. For your willingness to help us, herewith this letter we are sending you a small gift. Thanks for all your help.

Yours sincerelly,


Renny Anggraeni
Head Of Marketing




Invinition Letter
Invitation letter is a letter that contains an invitation or invite others to a group of people or the general public. Letter of invitation can be used for official purposes / semi-formal or informal.
Formal invitation letter is a letter that it expects the presence of a person at an event or particular purpose at the time and place that has been determined and written with a formal language. The letter format should have a professional appeal and must there is company’s logo in the letterhead. Example : Meeting Invitation Letter.
Informal invitation letter is a letter written in informal language such as birthday invitations, wedding invitations, invitation letter reunion, etc. Language used in informal letters are usually friendly. Likely to feel special and invited her presence was eagerly awaited. There are no specific rules for the format of an informal letter. However, informal invitation letter should have a warm approach.
Expression used in Invinition Letter :
·         We would like to invite for .....
·         Herewiith this letter we would like to .....
·         I am writing this letter to .....
·         We are looking forward to seeing you .....
·         Please call Mr/Mrs .....
·         I hope to see you soon.





Sample Formal Invitation Letter :

Lockwood Middle School
307 Main Street
Lockwood, NJ 51686
December 10, 2008



Mrs. Jody Coling
 Lockwood Health Association
 23 Main Street
 Lockwood, NJ


Dear Mrs. Coling:

My name is Susan Harris and I am writing on behalf of the students at Lockwood Middle School.

A significant amount of the students at the school have been working on a project which relates to the unemployment problem within the youth demographic of Lockwood. You are invited to attend a presentation that will be held within the media room of the school where a variety of proposals that will demonstrate the ability of the community to develop employment opportunities for the youth within the community.

At the presentation, there will be several students receiving awards which will recognize them within the community from the Mayor. Refreshments will also be available at the presentation.

As one of the prominent figures in the community, we would be honored by your attendance. Our special presentation will be held at our school auditorium on January 16th. Please reply by Monday the 9th of January to confirm your attendance to the function.

We look forward to seeing you there,


Yours sincerely,




Ms. Susan Harris



Sample Informal Invitation Letter :



 


Dear : Mrs Janet
Herewith this letter we would like you to come to my sweet 19th birthday party.
It will be held on Saturday, 29 June 2013 at 7 pm,
Tammany Cafe, Jalan Taming Raya 12 Jakarta
Dress Code : White T-Shirt and Blue Jeans
I hope to see you soon.

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